Tuesday 3 September 2013

should we ban plastic



In our classroom we have been learning to write a balanced argument this is my second one. I think that I have improved from my first one because I used backup facts. I found it moderately harder than the other one. But I still liked writing it.  

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Hi Hubert

I like the way you have included facts and figures to back up your arguments. When you are wanting to show where the paragraphs go, leave a blank line between them. You don't need to write "Para 1" as the reader will know that from the line break. It is useful to note the paragraphs when you are planning - just remember to take them out before you publish.